Feedback on pitch

As a group, we went round the class and displayed our pitches via our computers. We each read everyones pitches; providing each other with feedback. We gave two things that we liked about the pitch and then a wish that we would like to see them include/do.
 By doing this, it allows us to get constructive criticism from others to help apply it to our work to enable us to improve. Furthermore, it helps to have another set of eyes/ someone else's perspective to pick out what we have missed, as sometimes by looking at your own work, you can miss mistakes you have made/things you haven't included.
By looking at my feedback, I have noticed that I need to make my pitch more descriptive when describing my target audience, colour scheme and add in locations for images.